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    Write Your Homepage Last

    Reed VerdesotoReed VerdesotoDigital Systems Architect
    Write Your Homepage Last, custom Subsplash blog by ReedVerde

    Here is a stat that should stop you cold. Around 75 percent of the people who visit your church website never go past the homepage. They land, they read, they decide, and they leave. One page did the entire job.

    So let me ask the obvious question. If the homepage is where almost everyone makes their decision, why do most churches treat it like a table of contents and pour their real effort into pages nobody reads?

    Before you tell me "well, everyone goes to our About page," go pull up your analytics and look at the bounce rate on that page. I will wait. What you will almost certainly find is that people land on About, read a paragraph about your history and your mission statement, and leave. Because the About page asks them to become nothing. It asks them to do nothing. It is just information sitting there. Here is a pro tip you can act on today: take the About page out of your main navigation and move it to the footer. Let people reach it only after they have read the homepage. Stop handing your visitors a fast exit.

    The Real Problem Is Not Too Much. It Is the Wrong Things.

    Most people think a bad homepage is a cluttered one. I disagree. The most common bad homepage I see is the opposite. It is a photo of the building, a line about the church, and a bet that the visitor will click into the navigation and find everything themselves. That page tells a newcomer nothing about who they could be at your church. It is not a story. It is a bland landing pad.

    Imagine walking into a church for the first time, finding the pastor, and asking him to tell you about the place. And he says, "No thank you. Please go down the hall, knock on each door, and ask the person behind it what they do for you, if anything." And the doors are labeled "Blast." "Koinonia." "Sacred Saints." "Perfect Sisterhood." "Ignite." You would have no idea what is behind any of them. After one or two doors that turn out to have nothing to do with you, you would give up and leave.

    None of those names means kids, students, women, small groups, elder care, or recovery to anyone standing outside your walls. They are your names. They mean something to the people who already belong, and nothing to the person you are trying to reach.

    No pastor would ever run that hallway drill on a guest. A real pastor gives you a tour. He curates. He tells you the things that actually apply to you and skips the things that do not. If you walked in as a young single person, he would show you one set of things. As a family, another. As whoever you actually are, in whatever season you are actually in, he would take you to the places that fit and leave the rest for later.

    That is the whole point. A great homepage does exactly what your best hospitality volunteer does when a stranger walks through the door. It does not hand them a hallway of labeled doors. It gives them the tour.

    More information is not the enemy. Twelve sections on a homepage is completely fine. The question is never how many. The question is which ones, and whose language they are written in.

    Here is the filter. Every section on your homepage has to pass one test: does this matter to a brand new person, said in words they already understand? If the answer is yes, it belongs. If it is insider information a first-time guest is not ready for, it does not.

    So the missions trip stays off. Giving stays off. The congregational meeting stays off. The volunteer recruiting stays off. Those are things you ask of people who already belong. A newcomer is not there yet, and putting those in front of them is like asking someone for a favor before you have said hello.

    Learn From How Banks Sell

    Think of the difference between a bank's app and a bank's website. The app is for people who already belong. You log in, check your balance, move money, done. No marketing, no persuasion, just action. That is your church app.

    Your homepage is the bank's website, and that is a completely different job. A bank's website exists to turn a stranger into a customer. It leads with what you need and how they meet it, and here is the key, it says it in words every person already understands. Banks may call their products something clever internally, but on the website they say "checking," "savings," "home loan," because that is the language a newcomer is actually searching with. Your homepage has to do the same translation. Not "Small Groups." "Find your people." Not the internal ministry name. The need, in the visitor's words.

    Write Every Section Under One Preface

    Here is the sentence I want you to put invisibly above every section on your homepage: "Do you have a need like this? We are certain you do. Here is how we meet it for you."

    That framing changes everything. It stops the page from talking about the church and starts it talking to the person. It reads like your best hospitality volunteer giving someone a tour, in their language: here is what you do, here is who you will meet, here is where you start.

    Keep each section short. No more than about 35 words. A snippet, not an essay. Consumable. The goal is that a nervous first-timer can scan the whole page and understand who they could be here, without working for it.

    What Actually Belongs on the Homepage

    Start at the very top with the two things every visitor is quietly looking for first: your service times and location, and a link to watch the livestream. Do not bury these three clicks deep. They are the first questions in a visitor's head, so answer them before anything else.

    Then, before you sell anything, answer the fear. Add a "what to expect when you show up" section. Where do I park. How do I get into the building. Will someone greet me. What do I wear. How long is the service. A first-time guest is more anxious than you think, and this section lowers the temperature before the copy even starts. Answer the anxiety first.

    Next, your most recent sermon. This is where you show your preaching and your worship, and where you say plainly what you care about, why you preach, and what someone can expect to hear. Do not describe it. Show it.

    Then introduce the two people they will actually meet when they walk in. Not the whole staff. A stranger does not need your org chart. They need a face or two so the building feels less unfamiliar.

    Give them a short snippet of what you believe. Under 35 words. Enough to know where you stand, not a doctrinal statement.

    Then a section on what your church cares about and who it points people toward, by audience. Kids. Adults. Special needs. Recovery. Let each person see themselves.

    And here is the one most churches get backward. Do not put a "serve" section on your homepage. Put a "how you can be served" section. How to get help in a crisis, in a hard season, in ordinary daily life. That is what people are actually looking for when they come to a church. They are looking for something that will meet a need. Meet it.

    Round it out with special events that are genuinely for everyone, not the insider gatherings.

    End With One Clear Next Step

    Every homepage ends in one call to action, and it is the very first link button on the whole page: Visit Us. Contact Us. The wording should say exactly what you mean, that you will meet them where they are and help them get connected, and that the first step is simply to show up or reach out.

    That is the outcome the whole page is built toward. Not clicking around your site. Showing up. Everything else, the deeper and more specialized information, lives on the interior pages for the 25 percent who want to go further. And every one of those pages should end in a call to action too. No page should be a dead end that leaves someone with nowhere to go but the back button.

    So Why Write It Last?

    Because you cannot write this page until you know your own story well enough to tell it simply, and in your visitor's language, for every audience. And you only learn that after you have written the rest of the site from each of those audiences' perspectives.

    The homepage is the introduction to the book. And you write the introduction last, after the novel exists. You build your audience pages, your care pages, your kids and students and recovery pages, your event and sermon systems. And only then, standing on top of all of it, do you know which needs to name on the homepage and exactly how to say them.

    Write the homepage last. Then make it the only page that has to work.

    One Last Thing: Fill It With Your People

    Every one of these sections lives or dies on photography, and I mean real photos of your actual people. Not stock. Not the empty building. Lots and lots of faces, arriving, greeting, worshiping, serving, connecting. A newcomer decides whether they belong by looking for people who look like them, and no headline does that job the way a real photo does. If you want to know exactly which photos to take and how to deliver them, I wrote a full photo brief you can use: https://reedverde.com/photo-brief. And if you want to see all of this in action, a homepage that gives the tour and leads with its people, go look at tpcconline.com.

    About Reed Verdesoto

    I'm Reed Verdesoto, an independent Subsplash architect. I've built custom apps, websites, and communication systems for 500+ churches, ministries, and organizations, and I help teams turn a scattered digital presence into one that actually works and keeps working.

    If something on your setup feels broken, disconnected, or harder than it should be, reach out. I'd rather have a real conversation about what you're dealing with than sell you a package.

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    Originally published on reedverde.com